I See -.-
This seems like a highly personal artistic view and i cant say its good or bad to that fact. Mostly though the text was a bit distracting, and with the exception its not really my kind of flash, but hey whatever get your blood running. done well enough, i see what you meant when you wanted to to look "glitchy". so to sum it up smooth, outrageous and decent job.
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